November 21, 2009

For UTS

Technological Advancement has Advantage and Disadvantage Effects in Communication

People are always trying to make their life easier and more comfortable. Each and every invention is one of their efforts to make their life wonderful. There have been a lot of changes as the advantages of technological advancement. But, there are different opinions that technology has advantage and disadvantage effects. Some people say, technological advancement has made our life better, such as making the world better in communication, facilitating people in their activities, and giving people more leisure time. On the other hand, the others argue that technological advancement has more disadvantages in social aspect.

The development of technology has made our life easier. We use technology to make our work getting close to the perfection, or facilitate us to make it easier to relate with other people. For example, Alexander Graham Bell, the inventor of telephone had given us an easier way to get communication with other people. With the development of technology, we can communicate with our friends without meeting them; in conclusion, technological advancement has made our life easier and the communication faster, more efficient, cheaper and reliable.

The other people argue that technology has made environment and social structure going adversely. Technological advancement has harmed the environment. Such us sending massages with cell phone, heading computer in whole day with chatting, those are make us reduce our frequency to meet other people.

In conclusion, using technology must be arranged. So, we can divide our time to meet other people in order to keep relation well. We can use technology according to requirement. On the other hand, we must keep our knowledge about technological advancement. So, both of them must be going equally.

4 comments:

anis blogs said...

hai,,,jum,,,
your essay is good...
I think you must attend your grammar...
because our fault ussually in grammar...

Anonymous said...

I guess everything is quite good.
My suggestion is changing the words "nearer toward perfection" with "getting close to the perfection".
Explain the reason clearly, don't just mention it.
Don't forget to comment mine

aulia said...

thanks for your advice, I’ll fix it soon

little vinzha said...

Nice girl....
you have nice writing, like your photo
I hope you can be better...

 
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