September 18, 2009

English Thesis Task

Four Ways to Make Indonesian Products Become More Respected

Indonesia's Industry, it is important thing that we must respect and develop. Especially it's products. But unfortunately, Indonesian are so confident and prouder using foreign products than local's. Whereas, if we're buying local products, we can increase local exchange reserves. There are four ways that can make us respect Indonesia's products more, such as increasing the amount of export and decreasing import; Government should be more concerned about Indonesian products; advertising public figures using local products in their whole life; then, increasing the product quality of local industries.
Indonesia has rich natural resources, many commodities have been exported in several part of the world. Indonesian products must be increased, the amount of export should be greater than import. Because through export, Indonesia can cut trade deficit and get trade balance realtionship. The Government should be proud of local brand and more concerned about developing Indonesia's Industry. Such as giving appreciation and rewards. So that, many producers will be encourage to compete to get better in marketing their industry and upgrading their quality.
Participation of public figures will have significant influence to the world of industry. They can use local products, such as President, Mayor or even an artist. With this, people will morelikely follow their public figures.
Increasing products quality will result in better products selling. It's a consumer's common behavior to look for qualified with lower price. If local products have the said quality consumer will be satisfied and eventually they will respect local products more.
Indonesia has a lot of great commodity is. There's nothing we can lose by buying local products. Why not do it now?

5 comments:

Kartika Nuswantara said...

Aulia, i just wonder if you write the essay based on the technique i recommend you to follow. i believe that the draft you one made is good but then you write different thing here, but it is not better even it is likely written in a messy way. i do not see well organized essay. and remember it is a formal writing so omit any expression that will distract the formality.

Kartika Nuswantara said...

where is the other posting and your friends comment.

Kartika Nuswantara said...

dear, aulia, after reading more carefully i still can see the unity of your essay. next time keep using terms you use in your thesis statement when you develop the body partagraph. but, get friends to comment the sentences

Anonymous said...

Hai..
Use effective sentence (delete the unimportant). Your solutions is too general. Try to explain specifically.

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